Changes made from the first draft:
- Colour correction on the clips
- Effect placed over the eye at 0.35 to make the colour appear duller and almost black and white
- Some dialogue was removed from 0.46 (oh yeah um was removed)
- Some dialogue was added at 1.04 (the sound was cut so Jenny said ina instead of Nina - this has now been fixed)
- Sound effect added at 1.14
- Different music was added over the montage (Big hand buries the twelve by If these trees could talk replaced Wake of the martyrs by The secession as I thought the original song didn't fit the trailer very well)
- There was a heartbeat added on the clips after the montage
- The hand reaching for the knife was made to appear transparent or 'Ghost like'
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